tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post3927825985585825362..comments2023-10-06T14:55:25.403+01:00Comments on Brat's Weave Of Madness: Short Story: DriveHollererhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03316542922791106022noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-18011980967012634412010-02-10T23:55:21.248+00:002010-02-10T23:55:21.248+00:00lol I didn't know how to answer your question ...lol I didn't know how to answer your question or where, so I came back here. I was born in the city of Luton. My parents were visiting during a holiday when I was born, so they stuck around until I became 6 months old. Then they went back to New York with me.Shae Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00017140478037071293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-23298133653072318002010-02-04T01:35:54.951+00:002010-02-04T01:35:54.951+00:00I love the way you write! Everything flows nice an...I love the way you write! Everything flows nice and I just wanna keep reading to find out what happens next! Good job!<br /><br />At first I thought this was about you, then I read the title and the little "fictious" note on the bottom. Wow you're from the UK, I was born there!Shae Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00017140478037071293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-42190805307657888252009-08-15T16:18:01.774+01:002009-08-15T16:18:01.774+01:00//And Nursing school is not easy, let me tell you....//And Nursing school is not easy, let me tell you.<br /><br />:DKomalhttp://quarterpastseven.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-35692359779277976172009-08-04T16:35:20.705+01:002009-08-04T16:35:20.705+01:00@tina: I don't know about a longer story, I...@tina: I don't know about a longer story, I've been mulling it over for a bit, but I usually have a problem with continuations to prologues (e.g. Claustrum) :P Still thinking about it though, thanks!<br /><br />@Gautam: I agree about the shroeder and hyderabad bit, I just cast around for a name and got that, I'll probably change it. But I think that in a overdone noir story sort of way, the Maruti and the Porsche work.<br /><br />Well, the protagonist is supposed to be dissatisfied with pretty much everything he comes across. Pretty much a 'psychotic loser' who's not willing to do anything about his life. But I haven't really decided on whether he likes it or not, maybe he places too much stock with how people view him.<br /><br />@mali: Why thank you =) Incidentally, I hope to see more stuff from you too.. It's been what? an year? >=(Bharathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491796800787771729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-89422127524285166992009-08-04T15:42:37.723+01:002009-08-04T15:42:37.723+01:00i really like! its so dark, totally up my street! ...i really like! its so dark, totally up my street! and the best part is knowing you wrote it, that ur so much more moral and caring and damn unspontaneous that its really amusing as well!i really enjoyed it, makes me think of writing again too!i want to see more soon!maliha's musingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04676361606329314895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-57793387557515915172009-08-03T15:44:14.638+01:002009-08-03T15:44:14.638+01:00juxtaposing shroeder and hyderabad, or a maruti an...juxtaposing shroeder and hyderabad, or a maruti and porsche doesn't really seem realistic. go east or go west, don't muddle about in between.<br /><br />does the protagonist like his profession? i can't figure it out, there are passages suggesting for and against. or is he supposed to be a psychotic loser who can't make up his own mind?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08056778824063948944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7852161678046293117.post-34656817788592017242009-08-03T12:03:35.507+01:002009-08-03T12:03:35.507+01:00as far as the story goes, the actual details of ho...as far as the story goes, the actual details of hotwiring is irrelevant ^^<br /><br />not an original plot, but the narrator's voice is very clear and strong... and it's a short enough piece for that to work :) this'd be a good intro for a longer story, if you're up for ittinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03633542881365012088noreply@blogger.com